tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9218275625589637009.post4857391712812115676..comments2024-03-14T02:18:13.285-05:00Comments on T h e | D e e p | M i d d l e: Suddenly, AutumnBenjamin Vogthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10661489036836711335noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9218275625589637009.post-10990779930866776412008-10-23T13:59:00.000-05:002008-10-23T13:59:00.000-05:00I liked this at once and like it more with each re...I liked this at once and like it more with each reading. I like the questions, more images than I'll take time to repeat, and love the interplay between abstract and concrete, especially at the end--which has to be earned. I like the form (stanzas, questions, meter)--it's so interesting to see something in hexameter! How much do you think about meter?<BR/><BR/>Anyway--I like it.<BR/>--Katethemanicgardenerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08750985315536912324noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9218275625589637009.post-53797123512662070132008-10-11T18:46:00.000-05:002008-10-11T18:46:00.000-05:00Ms. Wis--I tried being organized like you, but the...Ms. Wis--I tried being organized like you, but the best I can muster is (attempting) a computer file. I'm doing ok keeping up with it, I think!Benjamin Vogthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10661489036836711335noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9218275625589637009.post-26321099123210442712008-10-07T21:26:00.000-05:002008-10-07T21:26:00.000-05:00That is one nice poem and a very impressive list o...That is one nice poem and a very impressive list of plants etc. I have all my plants etc. written out on index cards and filed in an old card catalog. Another drawer has phone numbers and the rest are birds' nests, feathers, pods etc.LINDA from Each Little Worldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02380944603357066650noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9218275625589637009.post-83343219829485057262008-10-07T15:00:00.000-05:002008-10-07T15:00:00.000-05:00I appreciate your comment, James. It's one of thos...I appreciate your comment, James. It's one of those rare poems that wrote itself, and is probably in my top 12 favorites. I haven't written a poem in quite some time, so consumed I've been with prose, but it won't be long and I'll be back.Benjamin Vogthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10661489036836711335noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9218275625589637009.post-76897221718475099482008-10-06T22:09:00.000-05:002008-10-06T22:09:00.000-05:00Had to tell you how much I like the poem, though s...Had to tell you how much I like the poem, though silence is probably the more appropriate response.James Goldenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12718058779971621920noreply@blogger.com