The way he brings it in,
leaves falling from his hair,
then kisses me, you would think
that gardening is pleasure,
which he says it is, digging deep
to kill bermuda roots, piercing
his hands on roses.
Sweat drips into my eyes
from his forehead, physician
curing himself with soil.
Sometimes I join him, raking
the pages of leaves, but the garden
is his, the place which gathers
struggles from his hands
and returns its own --
the story of dust, an origin
so deep and dense, it rose
like fire to make the mountain,
a narrative of tumble
and breakage from its sides
the wet roar of ages
under the slow beat of the sun.
The mountain offering itself
in mud, sticks and stones
for his space, his touch,
to make of it a shape and fragrance,
to taste the center of this earth.
7 comments:
Have you read Louise Gluck's collection 'the wild iris'? This poem made me think of Gluck's poems (from the garden).
Pam--Are you joking? Of course I've read her book, I've even taught it before. It is LOVELY, isn't it?
Lovely poem, Benjamin. I think I will share it in my creative writing class today.
Liisa--Glad to be of service. It's a nice simple, yet imagistically tight poem. Where do you teach?
Benjamin,
I could only wish to be so good as to TEACH creative writing. I am but a mere student. Truth be told, I really enjoy writing, but have not had much in the way of training. I have really been enjoying my class, although it is a bit of a bummer that my fellow students are really just taking the class for the credit, and don't really appreciate the class. Do you have any suggestions on books that one might find beneficial to develop their skills?
If you want to stretch your muscles, the anthology An Exaltation of Forsm is great. If you want to read poems I think teach you about what makes poems awesome, James Wright's The Branch Will not Break, maybe W.S. Merwin's The River Sound, and I've always liked Louise Gluck's The Wild Iris. If you like sonnets and stuff that sound contemporary, Rafael Campo's What The Body Told is very much so. Watch out.
Great!! Thank you so much. I am definitely going to look into all of these. :)
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